Having, designed scripted, recorded and tested the audio these conclusions were attanined:

The timing was way off

• Remeasured it today with markers and milestones.
• Use of stop points to gather slow walkers (possible interview site).
• Possibility of using the pause button and getting users to simultaneously restart.

The instructions were too vage and didnt stand out

• Need to higlight instructions from narration (beep).
• Need to repeat instructions.
• Need to warn in advance.
• Reassure the user that they are on the right path.
• Use visible landmarks to guide.

The intro was too long

• Reduce the length by cutting out Peter Greenfields dialog.
• Encourage team awareness and physical exercise from the start.
  

The story line generates interest

• Build on it by adding “conspiracy theories” and mixed reality info.

The interviews are too sudden and too many

• Introduce the speakers.
• Relate the interviews to the space.
• Make them more part of the story.

Gun fight is fun but limited interaction

• Add elements of tactics, little tasks such as cover, duck surveilance…

No speaking= low social exchange

• Take one earphone off and give instructions for oral dialogue

Tomorrow I will design the interaction and re-right the script, huff…